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女诗人赠我诗集。

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发表于 2022-2-22 12:24:07 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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先是被如此霸气的书名唬住了,斗起胆子,翻起书页,发现了自己喜欢的字句。有一种但丁《神曲》从海潮中归来的汹涌澎湃。
对联是应该追求这种气势的,即使挂在城门楼上,也神完气足。如同世人乍见光武帝,心生赞叹:“不想在此复见汉官威仪。”

比如胭脂河上天生桥(60页):
“胭脂涂壁,香艳六朝金粉地;

奇石卧波,醉迷两岸彩虹桥。”

不能说写得切,但却自有一种韵律,就像书名一般,让人泛起对历史的遐思。遥想那烟波浩渺之上,胭脂河初通,天生桥殷殷,让陶宗仪都生出浩叹之心。若是到了大寒时节,还能见到绛岩晴雪的奇景。

但我更喜欢42页:

“挤东屋下,

围灶台 等糍粑。”

——有一种过年的即视感。
在一方狭小的空间里,都让人能生出暖意,这就是儿时梦里老家的感觉。史烨往往都生出这样的情愫,为她的对联作品频频送力。

正月还没过去,看她的书,充满了喜气。49页《年味》写道:“
石磨珍珠吐白玉,油煎丸子泛金纹。”
不由人不生出共鸣。

略录数则,以为道贺!并向溧水人推荐。
记得,开卷有益。
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发表于 2022-2-22 15:23:24 | 显示全部楼层
要是来个书作者简介就好了。
发表于 2022-2-22 15:50:30 手机版 | 显示全部楼层
快读快评!点赞!
发表于 2022-2-22 16:24:27 | 显示全部楼层
祝贺家乡诗人!
发表于 2022-2-22 17:05:25 手机版 | 显示全部楼层
也获一本美女诗人赠书,甚好。
 楼主| 发表于 2022-2-22 17:11:42 手机版 | 显示全部楼层

感谢点赞。
发表于 2022-2-22 18:01:15 手机版 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2022-2-22 19:34:32 | 显示全部楼层
祝贺,点赞!
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发表于 2022-2-23 06:02:08 手机版 | 显示全部楼层
 楼主| 发表于 2022-2-23 06:42:46 手机版 | 显示全部楼层
First, I was frightened by such a domineering title. I took the courage to turn the pages and found my favorite words and sentences. There is a surge of Dante's Divine Comedy, returning from the tide.

Couplets should pursue this momentum. Even if they are hung on the city gate, they are perfect. Just like when the world first saw Emperor Guangwu, it was filled with admiration: "I am all surprised to see the authority of the Han Dynasty here again."

For example, Tiansheng bridge on the Rouge River (page 60):
"Rouge painted on the wall, fragrant and beautiful, golden powder for Six Dynasties;

Strange stones lie on the waves and get drunk on the rainbow bridge on both sides. "

It can't be said to be written stuck to old stories, but it has its own rhythm, just like the title of the book, which makes people daydream about history. Looking back on the vast expanse of smoke, the Rouge River opened at the beginning, and the Natural Bridge made Tao Zongyi sigh. If it comes to the cold season, you can still see the wonders of crimson rock and clear snow.

But I prefer page 42:

"Under the east house,

Wait by stove for rice crust. "

——There is a sense of instant vision for the Chinese New Year.

In a narrow space, she can produce warmth, which is the feeling of home in their childhood dreams. Shi Ye often gives birth to such feelings and frequently contributes to her couplet works.

The first month hasn't passed yet. Reading her book is full of joy. Page 49 reads:“

Stone pearls spit white jade,

and fried balls are golden. "

I say congratulations! And recommend it to Lishui people.

Remember, it's always good to open a book.
发表于 2022-2-23 07:06:38 手机版 | 显示全部楼层
祝贺楼主。
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为女诗人点个赞!
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